Revalizer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mission to the Moon]

wow, pretty good

I liked it alot, and the animation was great. I found the detail on the Aliens was fantasic and the repent sign guy was awesome, I find it hard to get anything that smooth at 24 fps with stick figures xD.

Lunaractive responds:

Thanks for the kind words- the whole video is 18 fps. One thing I would actually chaneg if I was to go back into the video is I would do mor frame to frame animation on the aliens. I originally planned on making the video as simple as possible to save time, then I just started enjoying it too much.
-eef

[Stick fight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]

Advice

I think you just need practice, and maybe flash in particular is just not for you.
Before i got into flash i used a software called stickpivot. It draws your stuff for you and its so easy to use, even my 6 year old brother can do ok.
It was a good try for what it was, and considering its your third thats not so bad. But i'd have some more practice before going on newgrounds. I'm a little worried that no - one will like mine either, and ive been animating for a while.
I seriously believe that with half a year's pivoting and a couple experiments and tutorials with flash and you'll be able to do this thing pretty well.
I hope you dont ind me mentioning stick pivot whoever is accepting (or not) this review.
xD. Keep on truckin' and dont give up!

Joshbad responds:

hey thanks for the review. im geting better.

[Birthday for clocks!]

Wtf?

What was that? I assume you are trying to get "blammed." well, you'd be pretty successful. Try adding about, say 2 minutes of action and adventure, and "edge of your seat" thrills, and about 30 more minutes of apologising, and you'd probably make up for that bit.
Maybe.
If you payed people to give it a good review.
even then, maybe.

xD. BLAM IT!!

Deamond606 responds:

No, its clock day, its not to be blammed.